[EdZ]

A very nice motion there Jamnet. A couple things I see. First, you are having a chin/shoulder collision on the backswing with the driver which tends to pull your head off of center.

A slight swivel of the chin to your right will give your shoulders more room to turn 'under' the chin. You can see by the right foot's finish that you are round housing as a result - the right shoulder needs to go more down plane.

That leads to a fair amount of a snare - the bob. A focus on a more stable center should help a lot. Check your knee\hip action as well. The more stable the knee/hip motion (pivot), the easier it is to maintain your center.

More focus on the pressure points in the hands, and a stable center. The rest is in great shape. Very nice work.