My hitters motion please critique

[grantc79]

So I literally worked on hitting for the first time in months for about 2 hours today.

I watched Brian Gay's video on here and some of Ted Fort's swings as well as my coach Rob aka Hunter's Hitting Stickman.

I started copying Brian Gay's setup routine, it worked wonders. It almost instantly had me figuring out my take away problems (I got the club head inside my hands way quickly).

This is what I have come up with.

Please critique.