[Daryl]

Grant,

Issues with your pivot.

standing up
running out of right arm
flattening your right wrist
weak hip action and truncated down-stroke hip turn
Right Shoulder is not moving nearly enough Down-plane

Most of this can be corrected by changing your start-down procedure. Rather than planting your left heel, start by turning your hips to the left. Try not to push off with your right leg.