I'm certainly no expert, but the right hand in both pix looks pretty Moe Norman like. Are you sure you don't have too much palm in the RH grip?
Both hands look a touch too much in the palms, but your overall alignments are solid, certainly workable.
For the left hand, get the grip up under the heel pad (use Hogan's 5 lessons drill where you hold the club only with the heel pad and index finger as a check).
For the right, as a hitter you can work with what you have now, but you'll find more feel if you use a 'trigger' finger with the right index and have the club a bit less in the palm, more in the fingers - check that your right wrist is 'level' at impact fix.
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